Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
[x]

deviantART

 

Prelude is epic fail!!

Sat Jul 18, 2009, 11:31 PM
Goddd!! "Prelude" is pissing me the hell off right now. I like the descriptions, the setting, but I detest some of the dialogue. It's really annoying because when I started getting ideas for this fic I was so excited and was almost tempted to start working on it right away and ditch "Waking Will" because the idea was so fresh in my mind. Maybe I should have done that...

Anyhow, there's been nothing but problems since I started writing this piece. Some of the dialogue is great, but the majority of it just doesn't feel in character. Perhaps I'm being paranoid; I don't know. (Or maybe I need to rephrase some of it.) I can't help but panic and I'm going into "I'm my own worst critic" mode. I think I'm going to start on another WxM project, send "Prelude" to Sophie and Runner (?)(do you really want to see it in all of its craptastic glory? =/) receive their feedback/help, and then get back to it and revise once I'm done with the other project.

EDIT: Ahaha, guys... This journal was me having a writing related freak out. Runner read "Prelude" and told me it was fine. Whenever I read through the so-called "trouble" spots it's obvious that she's right. So just pardon my silliness. I have a valid excuse for my behavior that shall not be mentioned. XP

Oh, and I'm not going to be sticking to the July 25th deadline. The point of "The List" was to get some necessary pieces done and have fun in the process of writing them. Setting a deadline for myself eliminates the fun factor completely and puts me under a lot of pressure. I do plan on getting all of them done on my own time and in between stories I'll do some of the writing exercises. I'd really hate not to follow through with my word to Helen.

EDIT #2: Don't kill me, guys, but I didn't get to finish "Prelude" tonight like I was hoping to. It was because I was responding to comments. I didn't think that was gonna be a problem and was prepared to stay up 'til four if I had to in order to get it done, but then I sunk into complete exhaustion about twenty minutes ago. Besides, I shouldn't write when I'm dead tired or else the content won't be up to par. I'll finish it later today (since it's already tomorrow), I promise, promise, uber promise! -collapses from exhaustion-

  • Mood: Annoyed
  • Listening to: Back Here - BB Mak
  • Reading: Inkdeath

Devious Comments

love 0 0 joy 0 0 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:iconsailorstarrunner:
I shareth thine pain. XP

--
If WillxPhobos was meant to exist, something tells me Shagon would go on a rampage.

Considering Will is the guardian of Quintessence and Matt usually transforms into Shagon using Quintessence, shouldn't WxM be called "Quintessenceshipping"?
:iconefa91:
Thank god someone can relate! I'm going nuts over here. >.< Want me to send you what I have of draft two so far? I'd need you to note me your e-mail and there are a few quick changes I need to make. I'd either get it to you asap or a little later when Mom and I get home from seeing HBP.

--
"My baby girl keeps gettin' older
I watch her grow up with pride
People make jokes, cuz they don't understand me
They just don't see my real side."
- From "Hailie's Song" by Eminem

Thanks to kawaii-anime-vamp911 for the literature tag!
:iconsailorstarrunner:
Sure, why not? ^^ My email is listed on my profile.

--
If WillxPhobos was meant to exist, something tells me Shagon would go on a rampage.

Considering Will is the guardian of Quintessence and Matt usually transforms into Shagon using Quintessence, shouldn't WxM be called "Quintessenceshipping"?
:iconefa91:
Okay! Cool. Thanks so much! =)

--
"My baby girl keeps gettin' older
I watch her grow up with pride
People make jokes, cuz they don't understand me
They just don't see my real side."
- From "Hailie's Song" by Eminem

Thanks to kawaii-anime-vamp911 for the literature tag!
:iconsailorstarrunner:
No prob. Maybe I can help out. *shrug* ^^

--
If WillxPhobos was meant to exist, something tells me Shagon would go on a rampage.

Considering Will is the guardian of Quintessence and Matt usually transforms into Shagon using Quintessence, shouldn't WxM be called "Quintessenceshipping"?
:iconefa91:
Thanks! =D Should I go check my e-mail?

--
"My baby girl keeps gettin' older
I watch her grow up with pride
People make jokes, cuz they don't understand me
They just don't see my real side."
- From "Hailie's Song" by Eminem

Thanks to kawaii-anime-vamp911 for the literature tag!
:iconperpetuallyluminous:
Ahh :/ i'm sorry.

--
my adorable avi is by :iconStarcharms: :D
----
Okay, me no eat cookie. Me eat..... EVERYTHING ELSE!!!!
:iconsailorstarrunner:
Not quite yet. I'll get to it. But guess what? I actually received a lick of inspiration last night and wrote out a whole chapter! The good news: I'm writing again. The (somewhat) bad news: Unfortunately, it isn't a WxM, SakuSyao or even SeiKaru. I've been telling you how I'm watching One Piece and all, right? *sigh* Well, I got inspired for one of my favorite pairings in that, ZoroxRobin. I don't mind if you don't bother with the story once I upload it, but if you do still want to read it, it'd be much appreciated. ^^

--
If WillxPhobos was meant to exist, something tells me Shagon would go on a rampage.

Considering Will is the guardian of Quintessence and Matt usually transforms into Shagon using Quintessence, shouldn't WxM be called "Quintessenceshipping"?
:iconefa91:
Okay. Cool. =) Awesome!! Great, I'm so glad that you finally got some inspiration!! =D I'll definitely read the fic once you upload it. ;)

--
"My baby girl keeps gettin' older
I watch her grow up with pride
People make jokes, cuz they don't understand me
They just don't see my real side."
- From "Hailie's Song" by Eminem

Thanks to kawaii-anime-vamp911 for the literature tag!
:iconefa91:
About that journal... I posted it in the midst of a freak out. After taking another look at the fic and making some revisions the dialogue is actually pretty good. I'm only worried about one part and Runner's helping me. ;)

--
"My baby girl keeps gettin' older
I watch her grow up with pride
People make jokes, cuz they don't understand me
They just don't see my real side."
- From "Hailie's Song" by Eminem

Thanks to kawaii-anime-vamp911 for the literature tag!

Sponsored By Ninja Assassin

Site Map